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She said my nights tend to be so sad and lonely
Thinking of you seems to right it only
for a little longer,
a part of the night.
If only you were here we could make this right.

The time that you left me I couldn't bear
the thought of you being elsewhere instead of right here
whispering softly
and holding me tight.
Tell me that these things are worth the fight.

Because I
I Can't Stand
The Thought of Her
Holding Your Hand
And I
I'm Not Sure
Tell Me These Words
Will Be Your Cure

Where is your head now, what are you thinking?
Think me as the last sip of what you've been drinking
throw down the bottle
and let it all go
when did you finally let your fear show

Open the books up and tear out the pages
You'll find me written in one of the stages
of teenage heartache
and grown up lifestyles
Just tell me you remember the smiles

Because I
I Can't Stand
The Thought of Her
Holding Your Hand
And I
I'm Not Sure
Tell Me These Words
Will Be Your Cure
©2006-2009 ~br34kmyh34rt
:iconbr34kmyh34rt:

Author's Comments

So, I got some inspiration to write tonight by an email that pieces sent me, it sparked the first line.. then it just kind of took on a life of its own. I'm fairly proud of it, and I look forward to writing guitar to it. When reading it, it doesn't seem like there is too much of a rhythm, that is in my head at least, its kinda of spoken word, with a twist. I impliment some rhyme scheme to it, but the style of it is, in my eyes, still spoken word. For the moment.

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:iconunconsciousrhapsody:
great work

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I didnt lack love what i lacked was understanding
:iconsspsarahs:
PLEASE tell me you and teresa arent fighting or anything, i doubt it...but by the lyrics it just kinda sounds like it could be.

Overall though, i can relate to this and i really really like it. Keep writing Megan!!
:iconbr34kmyh34rt:
nope, we're not fighting. it was just sparked by her saying how she misses me. Sometimes when I write, I think of stories in my head. its pretty fun. Even if the poem doesn't mean something specifically to me, it could to someone.
:iconsspsarahs:
yea, thats what i thought...i do the same thing sometimes, i just wanted to make sure :D
:icontooweaktosmile:
I'm really really excited for whenever you put guitar to this, booty.

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I'm all dressed up and ready to play.
:iconbr34kmyh34rt:
I came up with a guitar part for it.. Finally.. Its a little different then normal. and I may need to throw in a prechorus, or turn my current one into it, then write a new chorus
:icontooweaktosmile:
I loved when you played it for me today.
:love:

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I'm all dressed up and ready to play.
:iconclaryns:
yo thats good real good....

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Nothing is Forever.
For every begining there's an end.

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